Homecoming - by Dawn Rae

https://Voice.club - As she touched the antique lantern, Persephone felt a shock and dropped it to the floor, where it smashed.

Mortified at the loss of the magnificent creation and panicked at the price tag still tied to the ornate handle, Persephone dropped to her knees to gather the debris. She became entranced by the brilliant rainbow the fragments cast around her, not noticing the deep red obscuring the brighter colours until she began to feel faint. Her vision wavered, and her head began to float as she passed out.


When she woke, it was a deliciously tranquil process. She stretched, arms overhead, toes reaching for the foot of a bed that wasn’t there.

Her fingers caressed grass, her senses filled with fragrance such as she had never known. She was surrounded by blossoms of every colour she could imagine. Above, the clear sky was shades of a strawberry swirl cone, and that felt absolutely perfect.

Turning to her left, she encountered a questioning gaze from a small, blue creature with huge silvery eyes filled with concern.

“Who be you? How came you here?” Persephone heard, though its lips never moved. She reached out a hand, and the being peered closely into her palm. “Ah, I see,” it said, wonder filling its voice, “you’ve come home.”

Persephone brought her hand up before her eyes. In the centre of her palm was a strange mosaic, multi-coloured patches sparkling… and she thought she had seen it before, though she couldn’t remember where.


In the monochrome hospital room, the doctor turned from the still form in the bed, motioning the family outside, away from the constant beeping.

“I don’t know what to tell you,” he frowned. “There’s nothing wrong with her apart from the minor wound in her hand. Yet that won’t heal, and she won’t wake.” He studied his shoes, hands deep in the pockets of his white coat. “All I can recommend is you find an affordable care facility,” he said, “and then get on with your own lives as best you can.”

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Dawn, you have written an intriguing story. Consequently, I have so many questions to ask you. Why did you choose the title ‘Homecoming?’ I was deeply saddened by the doctor’s final words.

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Hi Margarida, thanks for commenting. Not sure why I chose that title… I think because Persephone found herself in an alien land she was never returning from, and the colours in her hand were an indicator this is where she belongs. Perhaps for me it’s because I wonder where people are when they’re in a coma… :woman_shrugging:t3:

All I can say is that your story is very engaging and intriguing, especially the doctor’s final words. Nice one.

Thanks Lotchie for your encouraging remarks, greatly appreciated.

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