Country Comfort - by Etienne Lombard

https://Voice.club - Mia clutched her phone as the bus rumbled down the dusty road, each mile taking her further from her collapsed startup in Cape Town and closer to her grandmother’s farm near Hermanus. Three months of “rest” stretched before her like a prison sentence.

The farmhouse stood unchanged—weathered clapboards, wraparound porch, ancient oak tree with the tire swing she’d abandoned at sixteen. Grandma Ruth didn’t mention the dark circles under Mia’s eyes or her ten-kilogram weight loss, just handed her a glass of sweet tea and pointed to the rocking chair.

“City’s got no patience for healing,” Ruth said, her calloused hands moving rhythmically with her knitting needles. “Land’s got nothing but time.”

The first week, Mia worked remotely, laptop balanced on her knees even as chickens pecked around her feet. The second week, the Wi-Fi mysteriously “broke.” By the third, she’d stopped checking for signals.

Instead, she learned to gather still-warm eggs, her fingers gentle against fragile shells. She helped neighbour Sam repair fences, his quiet confidence teaching more than his sparse words. In the evenings, fireflies transformed the fields into a living constellation as neighbours gathered for potlucks where four generations shared one table.

When Ruth’s arthritis flared, Mia took over the farmers’ market stand. She sold Ruth’s preserves and told stories of each recipe’s history to curious tourists. Their delight awakened something dormant inside her.

One evening, Ruth found Mia on the porch, sketching business plans for a line of farm-to-table products featuring local families’ recipes.

“Thought you were escaping work,” Ruth observed.

“This isn’t escape,” Mia replied. “It’s connection.”

When the bus came three months later, Mia boarded with two suitcases instead of one. The first contained her city clothes. The second held canning supplies, seed catalogues, and the business plan for “Country Comfort Foods.”

She didn’t need to choose between worlds anymore. She’d found comfort in carrying both.

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What a great story and take on life. The protagonist didn’t have to choose between comfort levels in both modern and not so modern times.

Its a great example of having the best of both worlds!

I’m grateful for the medical advances and technology that we all benefit from!

I see the wonder, joy and exploration through my grandchild’s eyes in nature and his surroundings!

This story showed me how lovely our world is. Thank you for this!

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Welcome to the Voice Club, Etienne. I am so excited to read more stories from you! In fact, your story is superb and beautifully crafted. You portrayed so much about living our best in this world - wherever we are.

Etienne, this is a sweet story of healing and finding oneself in a simple country life.

I enjoyed this story, Etienne. The healing power of the countryside and the simple things in life have done wonders for Mia. The risk would be if the business becomes too successful, too fraught and the connection to the farm becomes broken. Let’s hope not!