Nature Drill - by Regina Higgins


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“Children, it’s time for our morning nature drill.”

There were groans up and down the rows of desks.

“Now, don’t complain,” the teacher said. “We’re lucky to be here, safe within the strong walls of our settlement. It’s a small thing to train ourselves in what’s outside, even if we never see it.”

The children shook their heads and rolled their eyes.

“Let’s begin. What is a tree?”

The children answered in chorus.

“A tree is a larger-than-average plant that sometimes produces fruit.”

“What is the wind?”

“The wind is the air moving over the land and water.”

“What is rain?”

“Rain is liquid water that falls from the sky.”

“Very good.”

One hand shot up. “Did Old Earth have these things?”

“Yes,” the teacher said. “But Old Earth was destroyed in the Great Fire, long ago.”

The children settled in to hear the tale they’d heard so many times before.

“The Old Earthers made mistakes. Because of these mistakes, there was a Great Fire that burned all over Old Earth for a hundred years. Luckily, our ancestors found this planet, which is very much like Old Earth once was. They traveled here and built our settlement, New Earth, where we live now.”

Another hand. “Will there be a Great Fire on New Earth?”

“No,” the teacher replied. “We don’t make the same mistakes the Old Earthers did. And why? Because we never, never open the door.”

“Never open the door,” the children chanted.

“That’s right. Now, would you even consider going outside?”

“NO!”

“Why not?”

“Outside is for the machines.”

“Yes. And the machines—"

“Take care of us.”

The smallest child raised a hand.

“Outside,” he asked quietly, “does the wind ever blow through the trees?”

There was laughter.

The smallest child continued.

“Outside, does the air feel different after it rains?”

More laughter.

The teacher shook her head. “These are foolish questions. How can we know unless we go outside? And that’s—children?”

“Forbidden.”

The teacher nodded.

“Correct. And that concludes our nature drill. What good New Earthers you are!”

This is a touching and powerful story, Regina. Your skillful writing describes a possible future that we could face as a human race where our dear mother earth no longer sustains life. In our current society, there are many people who are either asleep, unaware, or just ignore the huge threat our planet is currently facing. It’s nice to know that some folks like you are awake, aware, and sounding the alarm! I am also proud to be part of the Voice Club, where we publish great stories such as these that raise awareness!

Thanks, Chris! This prompt really touched me. I’m proud to be part of Voice Club, too. I look forward to reading stories on this prompt by our community members. I’m sure there’ll be a great variety, all of them wonderful!

Your story makes me shiver, Regina - from dread, not from cold! Right now, we’re in the middle of a massive heat wave. The real feel temperatures are 110, 108, 112, and 109 for the next four days. And this is September!

Here on Old Earth, we never seem to learn. The world is indeed ablaze, just as the prompt suggests. This is truly the biggest problem facing all of us.

Your story was extremely powerful, especially with the way you used your voice. The teacher was very matter-of-fact, discussing the current status quo without emotion. Your imitation of the children was perfect. I thought you must have had some young ones there as you recorded the story!

All in all, a superbly written story which should be required reading for a world badly in need of a wakeup call.

Thanks, Julie! I was very moved by the prompt (thanks, Stacy Walters!) and the whole scene came to me very quickly. And I was grateful for the opportunity to read it aloud. Yay for Voice Club!

Now I’m really eager to read other stories by members of our community. Everyone will have a different way at coming at the prompt, and all of them will be terrific. Can’t wait!