Sacrifice - by Greene Wills

https://Voice.club - The young Carabiniere stared at the group of shaking men against the dilapidated wall, their limbs trembling in their shabby clothes. He turned to look at the unreadable icy-blue eyes of the Hauptsturm­führer.

“Why them? Why so many? Only one of your men was killed…" the young man gently queried.

“One of us is worth more than this nest of rats,” the Hauptsturm­führer spitefully replied.

“We are all men…nobody on this earth can judge the worth of a life, the weight of a soul. They are just country people, fathers, brothers, sons…look at them…” the Carabiniere insisted.

The German shifted slightly, his mouth a thin line. “I suppose you are going to ask for mercy. There will be none; I need to follow my orders. Beside, this is your fault: if you’d done your job and captured those bloody terrorists who caused the death of my man, this wouldn’t need to happen!”

“But it did, Sir, and these men are innocent. How could you live with this on your conscience?”

The Hauptsturm­führer regarded the young man with interest, a modicum of new respect tinging his clipped voice.

“I can. Why bother? I need to show that we did our job here. Don’t get involved, they are not worth it, I’m telling you!”

“Is part of your job showing that you took life to avenge death?” The Carabiniere’s voice was so low that the German had to lean nearer.

“You can say that…”

“Then you can have mine instead of theirs…”

“You can’t mean it!”

The young soldier didn’t reply. He only walked to the wall and helped an old man to his feet, before pushing the rest of the group away. He stood alone, his chin up, his hazel eyes watching the small platoon with their raised weapons. He looked at the azure sky and thought of his mother, hearing an almost forgotten lullaby in his mind.

The stunned Hauptsturm­führer took his cap off, nodding at the young man, before shouting “Fire!”

The noise of the discharged guns covered the German’s sob, while the smoke hid his tears.

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@GreeneWills

Greene, this story is powerful and unforgettable. Not only is it well-written and perfectly paced, but your reader is truly superb. Could you tell us the name of your reader?

Congratulations on this work of art which reminds us of the true horrors of war.

Happy holidays to you and yours, with prayers for peace.

@GreeneWills

Hi Greene - I’m so glad to see you back again, as you are one of the “old-time” members enjoying this new platform. This story has a real kick to it - especially the ending. Your main character had unbelievable courage. I also really enjoyed the voice of the person who read your story. I listen to a lot of audio books, and his voice is the high quality I am used to in my audio books.

I think that @Lotchie , @MikeEverley , and @JulianKern might also enjoy this story.

Happy Holidays, and I hope to read more of your stories in the coming New Year.

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Thank you, Julie, much appreciated. I enjoy very much writing for Voice club/SoftDesign.
Crimbo greetings to you and your loved ones & a Happy 2025!

Many thanks, Chris. The man in the story was real…
My reader is the most important person in my life…
I only wish that they didn’t change the format of the platform as I find it rather awkward to use. In fact, this is the first time I manage to reply to messages!

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Yes, the Voice.club has been upgrading to keep up with all the latest technologies, and there were a lot of necessary changes. Initially they tried YouTube comments, but that method had many limitations, so now there is good news.

Moving forward, all the Voice.club comments will go through this [ Discourse ] section, which is so much better than YouTube comments. Hope you like the new discourse comments and find them easier to use. The more I use the discourse section, the better I like it!

@Chris

Merry Christmas, Chris. Sending my virtual gifts and hugs to you and to everyone here.

Hello, Greene ( @GreeneWills ). This is a remarkable story of yours. Congratulations. And like others, I also admire the voice of your reader. Such a perfect voice suited for this story.

Merry Christmas to you and to your family.

Hi Lotchie

you are too kind as usual! Yes, I fell in love with that voice a while ago but it feels like yesterday!

Merry Christmas to you and your loved one!

A very moving and poignant story. The carabiniere was indeed a courageous man, so selfless.

Thank you Margarida! It was very hard for me to write this. My grandfather told me about that young man, he was real and only 22 when they executed him…

@GreeneWills - I agree with @MargaridaBrei - when I read your story I was blown away, but now that you tell us this was based on a real person, I am speechless.

You have great writing talent, and I look forward to your next story!