The Missing Piece - by Dawn Rae

https://Voice.club - Veronica sat at the kitchen table in tears as she rearranged three bits of broken porcelain.

“Sweetheart,” David said, “what’s happened?”

“That damned cat,” she replied, with little conviction.

David recognised the shards as the treasured teacup from her granny, and he could imagine Veronica’s conflict. She loved the cat to distraction but this time the feline had gone too far.

“Can it be repaired?” he asked. “Maybe with that gold stuff the Japanese use?”

“No,” she sighed. “There’s a piece missing, right in front. I’ve searched everywhere; it’s gone.”

David waited until she left the room before getting down on the floor to check. She was right, the fourth piece was missing. He put the three pieces into a drawer before going online for advice on how to repair the cup without the missing piece. Someone suggested a local crafter.

David followed the directions to an old green door. No signage, just a faded number. He opened it to find a dark corridor with a dim light at the end. His heart thudded, knowing many murder mysteries started with scenes like this. But remembering his wife’s sadness, he stepped inside.

A few days later David convinced Veronica to stay abed while he got the coffee. He put the parcel on the coffee tray and made his way upstairs where he watched as she untied the ribbon and whipped off the lid.

Veronica was speechless, staring into the box, and he thought, damn, it didn’t work.

But it did.

Inside was the treasured teacup, delicately lined in gold where the pieces met. In the centre was a reconstructed piece sporting a delicate image of the cat. David looked at the rapture on Veronica’s face and knew this was the best gift he would ever give her.

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@DawnRae

Dawn, this story is priceless! We get all the drama of the broken cup, the way Veronica was caught between love for her cat and sorrow for the loss of the treasured teacup, and then the perfect solution! David is a brilliant husband, full of love and creativity! Thanks for a very happy read.

Thank you Julie, I’m so pleased you liked it :two_hearts:

Dawn, I laughed out loud at your brilliant conclusion! Just wonderful! The perfect way to make all right.

@DawnRae

Oh! What a very emotional read. But the way her husband manages to fix the teacup and make his wife happy is so touching. I wish to experience that kind of love from a partner.

Hi Regina, thanks for your encouragement and feedback :two_hearts: I’m so pleased you enjoyed it.

Hi Lotchi, thank you for your feedback and I’m really pleased you enjoyed it :two_hearts:

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What a sweet ending! And what a loving husband to see Veronica’s pain and determine the best way to fix the cup and her.

Thank you Susan, I enjoyed writing the piece.

What an adorable husband; he is so devoted to his wife. Sweet touch of placing a cat in the remodelled cup! Dawn, you have written a moving story of romance and dedication.

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