The Secret of John Stagg - by Dawn Rae

https://Voice.club - When first I saw John Stagg, dapper in his tweed jacket with the small tear, I thought, I could do something with that, and I wasn’t thinking about mending, you understand, me just a lass full of romantic notions.

He won over Cook and Mrs. Harris, then switched from devilish charm to manly seriousness so Mr. Drake would hire him to manage the stable lads. And all along I fancied his eyes lingered on me.

Then I found Cook muttering how John Stagg was a treasure. I saw him whispering to a maid, and next she fair floated out from the stables. Mrs. Harris didn’t say a word, but she knew and – dare I say it – perhaps benefitted from his favours herself. And still, he would catch my eye and smile that smile, and my heart broke. I could never settle with a philanderer like John Stagg.

I was delivering eggs when her Ladyship arrived, but when I returned the lads were huddled around our John.

“Her Ladyship,” he said, “looked at me as she passed.” The lads nodded. “And then,” John dropped his voice, “Mrs. Harris called me. Next thing I’m to present myself in her Ladyship’s chambers.”

The babble was broken by one young voice.

“What happened, Mr. John?”

“Now, young George,” he replied, “a gentleman never tells.”

I was devastated. I loved this man, but I couldn’t bear his philandering so I was weeping quietly outside when who should pass but John Stagg.

“Polly,” he cried, “whatever has you in such a state?”

“You!” I said. “Tis you, John Stagg, and your womanizing.”

“What?” Then his eyes sparkled. “Polly-girl,” he whispered, “surely you know tis you I love? And it pleasures my heart you feel the same.” He knelt before me and removed my shoe.

“Dear girl, no other woman will ever have more of me than this, my famed foot rub.”

As he rubbed my aching toes, my whole being filled with a wonderful bliss and I heard myself say, “John Stagg, you are indeed a treasure.”

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Greetings Dawn - Great story with a nice and wholesome surprise at the end! You recorded such a professional reading, that I thought you might be a voice actor. Looking forward to your next story and wonderful voice!

Chris, thank you so much… I really appreciate your encouraging comments :grin:

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Your talent in writing is exceptional. I was amazed with your wholesome surprise in the end. How I wish to be such talented as you are. Nice one.

Sweet story Dawn, set in the wholesome comforting country.

Thanks Margarida, glad you liked it!

Thanks Lotchie, you’re very kind, I appreciate it.

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This is a delightful story, Dawn, well-written and fanciful. I love the way you paint a particular period of time and group of people, from Her Ladyship to the stable lads. Your use of dialogue has the reader right there with Polly, as her heart slowly breaks. Then, the ending! Brilliant.

Ah Julie, thank you so much. I’m so pleased you enjoyed it :two_hearts:

Beautifully written and read Dawn. You could really identify with Polly’s emotions and who knew that a foot massage was the way to a girl’s heart.

What an apt name for the philanderer!
I found a touch of Lady Chatterley’s Lover in it too…delightful!

Thanks Julian, glad you enjoyed it :wink::two_hearts:

:joy: Oh Greene - I never ever thought of that :rofl:

Congratulations, Dawn, on your win! This is your best story so far, and truly deserved to win. Happy days!

Julie, thank you so much :two_hearts:

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Congratulations!

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