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Hello Dawn - You’re story “Seconds” really pulled me in. I felt so sorry for the woman and her strange life situation. At the end, when her daughter snuggled up and said Mom was the first to marry a bigamist, I laughed out loud. I also think @MargaridaBrei would enjoy this a highly entertaining story!
Julie, thank you so much for your comments about Seconds. I really appreciate it.
Happy New Year Dawn! Yes, Julie is absolutely correct. I really liked your “Seconds” oral reading, and the humorous last lines 
Enjoyable story Dawn, Loved the ending.
Thank you so much Julian 
Ah Margarida, thank you so much, greatly appreciated 
When our life gets messy like this, we really count on our daughter’s sweetness and love. I love it so much, Dawn (@DawnRae ).
Lotchie, thank you so much!
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