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I was drawn into this story, starting with the first sentence! You are an excellent writer with many descriptive lines such as the cake recessing to escape her. I don’t remember the exact words; they were eclipsed by the ending! Such a nice twist brought a burst of laughter from me. Well done.
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Susan, thank you so much, I really appreciate your comments and I’m pleased you enjoyed the story 
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